Annotated 4-22
I gave Erica more latitude than usual to change things around here, so this is an interesting contrast with the original script:
I’m going to be a bit vague about action breakdowns and dialogue assignments here, because I think what’s most important is that this page flow naturally. There should be no borders or backgrounds on it– it’s just Best and Byron fighting fighting fighting.
The gist of the action here is that Best bounces back from his disadvantage to give Byron a smashing, temporarily disabling blow with his Axe. In more detail:
1. Best and Byron go at it Axe to axe, in a shot that looks like it took place only seconds after the preview image.
2. Byron’s sheer strength knocks Best back, and he’s raising Brayen to do more damage.
3. Best begins to break out his “Spider-Man moves,” using his dancer’s grace and agility to avoid Byron’s most damaging blows. He narrowly dodges an ax-swing from Byron here.
4. Byron charges Best powerfully and quickly, but Best begins to twirl him around in a mix of ballroom dancing and judo, raising his own ax-guitar in the air and preparing to bring it down.
Axe to Axe! Axe to Axe! Axe to Axe!
Just an FYI, on the previous page, the “next page” arrow isn’t working again.
Works fine for me. Think it’s a caching issue.
I’ve cleared the cache on three different browsers and loaded the page fresh on each. Still experiencing same issue.
Just checked; I’m getting the same error, and this time reloading doesn’t help.
Same here.
Well, I’m honestly stumped. I’m also trying it on multiple browsers, logged in and not logged in, and not a hair is out of place. I do some tinkering with these pre-loaded pages sometimes right up to the last minute, but that shouldn’t have an effect on that link. I’ll keep trying to see if I can isolate it.
Works just fine for me on Safari. Could be a specific browser issue.
As far as I can tell, the page just before the current page doesn’t link to the current page, but all earlier pages do link to their respective next page. In other words, if a page is posted today, that action fixes the “next” link on the page that was posted two days ago.
Have you tried to cache it ousside? How bow da?
I don’t think the page gives off the impression that Best dodges with that dancer grace, honestly.
I don’t think it would’ve been easy to pull off at all either, though.
“You might say that the original script…”
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“…got the axe.”
“YYYYYYYYYYYYEE– wait that’s horrible you should be ashamed of yourself.”
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