This would be the first John page that Phil scripted, and the differences between my and Phil’s writing styles are pretty pronounced here. I was all about trying to get as much info as possible into the pages, which was good for the quick survey of World’s Rebellion and post-mystic Savasi cultures, but it sometimes meant that moments like the reveal of the death pit didn’t get as much room to breathe as Phil would’ve given them. Here, Phil focuses almost everything in the page on Harky’s entrance, with the group’s reactions kept at the bottom margin like scattered bits of debris.