Hmm, let’s see, do I tag this one? No tags in the original, but it’s pretty obvious whose shadow that’s supposed to be. Yeah, let’s go for it. I think this one was mostly Flo, but regardless of who came […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
For all my self-critique about the previous pages, I enjoy this resolution. Except for the way I keep calling attention to “Frigg can’t say ‘fuck’ anymore,” it’s all pretty solid. Sorry for the ship tease, if this was in fact […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Stuff I like: The resolution of the E-Merl plot, which makes pretty apt use of his character. The Seinfeldian way the various threads of this tale are starting to intersect, with Bandit and Rachel’s little project making Byron do a pratfall […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Some good story concepts here. As I’ve said elsewhere, I feel like we underused Gravedust’s guide-the-spirits-to-their-destiny raison d’etre after the first few chapters, so I relished the chance to make it the focus of a subplot, even one so simply […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
So I wrote the first scene here exactly as it was except for the last line, which Flo added. And that obviously changed my plans for Frigg and Syr’Nj drastically. The earlier version of the plot would’ve been a new, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
