A few people commented on the last page: “Why doesn’t Carol just go to the cops?” I think all but the most strident police reformists would agree this is one situation where cops would be useful. Gather a little evidence […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Your mileage may vary, I don’t want to make light of emotional abuse and gaslighting… but I still snicker at panel 2. Honestly, this whole page of Phil’s is kind of macabre fun for me, the way it stretches a […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The caller ID “BOSSMAN” and the Weezer ringtone sound like things Carol came up with when she was still starting the job and full of the youthful sass we saw more in Chapter 9. But then, she seems to have […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Earlier drafts of this scene had HR a lot talkier. He would have discussed his plans for Ferris’ body, making it clear he has intentions here beyond just killing a witness. And he would have spoken briefly about what he […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
For this chapter, we were trying something I might describe as a “forked outline,” where almost every page contained suggestions of other possibilities. I have forgotten most of these suggestions by now, and this page is so laden with seeming […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
