A little more silent gloom for Byron before we get to the meat of this scene. I loved the reader commentary to the effect that Byron could just give everyone the finger and go off to do his own thing. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I tweaked the alt text, but I do like “Everyone Hates Byron”: it really puts a bow on Byron’s situation in this chapter. Of course, Syr’Nj isn’t being as hard on him as it looks, most of the newbies and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I don’t have much to say about this transitional page, except I like how the silence in this page and the last have been used to put us right inside Byron’s mood. Phil has done some role-playing as a few […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Byron has two concepts of himself. The negative one is “like classic Bruce Banner but worse,” the positive one is “professional asskicker.” That positive concept of himself has already taken quite a beating from his berserker episodes, but not like […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I like how hard Carol goes here; the basics of her dialogue were Phil, but I shuffled and altered it a bit for an emotional crescendo. I do some of my best work with characters who openly doubt an idea […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
