I forgot how much Rabbit got to do in this chapter. With all the panel-time he gets and that ship factor, one might think we were gearing up to promote him to the majors. Bandit knows this situation needs a […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Nobody recognized the inspiration for Pardo’s speech in panel 3, which is shown above. I tagged in to write Pardo’s lines, and was maybe being a little unfair to 2006 Clooney by using (some of) his words… I get the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Scipio’s style of interrogation has always been to motivate people to talk and get out of the way of those already motivated. He needs to direct this discussion a little, but only with a few words here and there. (This […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I think we should have spent more of pages 12-13 showing Brother Tom’s emotional transition. It’s a bit of a journey back from “What even is this, how dare something happen that I didn’t predict, who is this squinty-eyed jackass telling me my nihilism is meaningless” […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
IT’S A TRAP(EZOID)!!! Nice detail in panel 2 that what alerts Bandit and Rabbit first is a small stampede from the wildlife. They’ve known something was not right in their woods for ages, but what they’re feeling now is more […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
