Wait, now it’s a “few dozen sky elves?” We really were kinda lax about the head-counts. Maybe another dozen or so Hollister-Clair supporters portaled to join the cause at the very last minute. I’ve already mentioned Syr’Nj struggling with her anti-avian prejudice […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Panel 1 is interesting: even as Caneghem concludes his case for isolation, he looks to Syr’Nj for understanding, comparing his people’s withdrawal from the known world to her withdrawal from the Gastonian Hall of Houses. Officially, he wants no bond […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
In an earlier draft of this speech, Caneghem showed particular loathing for goblins: “Sky elves died from goblin explosives while defending human interests…Why should more die from human explosives defending goblin ones?” My thinking was that elder sky elves had […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: “A very good vintage, year 1078. The grapes are grown on the branches of Yggdrasil, aged in the elevated spires of our city, and seasoned with idealists’ tears.” Again, I set up this scene, and Flo rewrote and added […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This one was Flo with some tweaks from me. She was really happy with the last line I added, IIRC. I also like the “practiced ease” bit: it shows Penk thinking like a tactician. And that tactical thinking is also […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
