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Flo and I went back and forth on when Penk should enter this scene. At one point, I felt he should come in just in time to see Rachel’s death, or at least to ask the question that Magda asks […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Flo and I went back and forth on when Penk should enter this scene. At one point, I felt he should come in just in time to see Rachel’s death, or at least to ask the question that Magda asks […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
ICYMI, and some people did miss it, Rachel’s got a compound fracture in her leg. Despite that, she could’ve maybe pushed through the pain enough to push herself out and into Sundar’s arms, if Frigg were safe elsewhere… and of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Ironically, Sundar never feels more like a star to me than when he accepts his lot as a supporting player. He’s shed the defensive narcissism he indulged as leader of Fightopia but retains the simple devotion to helping people that […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
From what WAV’s said about the Beast, it probably would’ve tried running Frigg over again and getting away if it felt like it could. Despite its greater size, the team’s done a good enough job surrounding it, tracking it, and wearing it […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Magda just had her life saved by a Peacemaker. Even over and above the alliance they’ve formed here to save her people, that’s a detail she will not forget. Readers were beginning to detect that the length and stakes of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…