Ideas for “fun in the sun, surf, and sand” were starting to feel thin on the ground, so Flo conceived this switch in focus. At this point in the story, JJ’s been introduced and is closing in on Xan and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Well, we needed to write something to explain how Shanna could gun a guy down in the street and not at least get questioned about it. We also needed to establish there was some growing police interest in Hurricane’s illegal […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: “Sepia to black.” Some readers took me to task for the relatively high odds I gave Shanna yesterday if the JJ she’d gotten the drop on hadn’t been softened up by killing two cops. I dunno, 1 in 4 […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
We talked about various possibilities, including the “gas leak trap,” to be things that softened JJ up, but as for how he would die, I think we were pretty clear on that as soon as we started taking about it. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
So my original version of this scene left off with Lia’s “It could get you in serious trouble one day” and picked up after JJ had met the cops in a shootout: this page was all Flo’s addition. I was […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
