That “Oh, MY!” balloon’s position still irritates me a little. It should be at the panel’s top left, and even if we had to encroach on the panel borders to make that happen, it’d be worth it. As it is, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
For all my self-critique about the previous pages, I enjoy this resolution. Except for the way I keep calling attention to “Frigg can’t say ‘fuck’ anymore,” it’s all pretty solid. Sorry for the ship tease, if this was in fact […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Stuff I like: The resolution of the E-Merl plot, which makes pretty apt use of his character. The Seinfeldian way the various threads of this tale are starting to intersect, with Bandit and Rachel’s little project making Byron do a pratfall […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Some good story concepts here. As I’ve said elsewhere, I feel like we underused Gravedust’s guide-the-spirits-to-their-destiny raison d’etre after the first few chapters, so I relished the chance to make it the focus of a subplot, even one so simply […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
We promised a couple of bonus stories to readers as part of the Kickstarter incentive, but it’s hard to say what constitutes a “bonus!” Flo’s later bonus tale, “Breaking Bread with the Enemy,” would blend almost seamlessly into the narrative, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
