For all my self-critique about the previous pages, I enjoy this resolution. Except for the way I keep calling attention to “Frigg can’t say ‘fuck’ anymore,” it’s all pretty solid. Sorry for the ship tease, if this was in fact […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Stuff I like: The resolution of the E-Merl plot, which makes pretty apt use of his character. The Seinfeldian way the various threads of this tale are starting to intersect, with Bandit and Rachel’s little project making Byron do a pratfall […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
So I wrote the first scene here exactly as it was except for the last line, which Flo added. And that obviously changed my plans for Frigg and Syr’Nj drastically. The earlier version of the plot would’ve been a new, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
We promised a couple of bonus stories to readers as part of the Kickstarter incentive, but it’s hard to say what constitutes a “bonus!” Flo’s later bonus tale, “Breaking Bread with the Enemy,” would blend almost seamlessly into the narrative, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Cute and funny penultimate installment here, with only the slightest hint of Bandit’s social issues giving it a little bit of weight. I’m pretty sure she’s sincerely unaware of her friends’ preferences, despite the story Jason tells so delightfully in […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
