Another draft of this scene: PAGE TWENTY-ONE 1. The steam from the cookpot reaches the bowl of stew in Best’s hands (Best, who is now almost completely back to his normal shade of color under a couple of blankets), which […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
The “second Arkerra” theory is something Flo hashed out on the phone with me while I was at an airport. I’m not entirely sure the story needs it. The idea of seeming causes not actually being causes works fine for […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This installment was coming out around the time of the 2016 election, which disrupted a lot of people’s assumptions about how politics worked and what the people, en masse, would stand for. And that’s all I’ll say about that. It’s […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
You’d think these two might’ve bonded here, since both split off from the group to seek answers and defy divine judgement, but the difference is that Best did it like a dumbass. Frigg is well and truly over the attraction […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Weo’s personality does a lot to make this basically expositional scene go down smoothly. He’s having fun, but he’s also doing important work, and those two facts are working together rather than coming into conflict. The subtext is mostly text […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
