In earlier notes, this chapter included a lot of B’ial Vezk and sky elf stuff that we ultimately put into Chapter 47. There was also a different ending in which Harky, though spared by Penk, is still kind of broken […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Interesting expressions from the goblins in both reaction panels here. Goblaurence and Auraugu would feel worse if this fight had gone the other way, but they both have some personal feelings about Harky, who led the whole Rebellion to its […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Gonna take a break from both FB ad copy and political commentary for the next few pages. Much like Penk does to Harky here, the FB ads for these pages beat the “troll” joke and the comparisons with America’s fraught […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: If nothing else, this arena will kill anyone’s childish belief in the Tooth Fairy. Bonus points to John (under Flo’s direction) for making Harky look extra scary here. This scene needed a spectacular show of force *and* personality from him, […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Our FB text for this one was kind of eh. I prefer John Harvey’s line, “Harky’s health bar is measured in teeth.” There’s a faint echo of the mentor in Harky’s speech here, at least at first. Some part of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
