Jarvis and Ardaic don’t know Annunziata’s plan for tonight. But they do know about certain pre-existing plans involving Annunziata, and they know Annunziata is likely to keep doing and saying things, in general, that will justify those plans. That’s the […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
As a character, Annunziata only has so much to recommend him: his range is pretty thoroughly explored in this one chapter. But as a source of hilarious John Waltrip faces, he’s rivaled only by Frigg. Meanwhile, Guildmaster Persson gets his […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Earlier drafts of this scene had HR a lot talkier. He would have discussed his plans for Ferris’ body, making it clear he has intentions here beyond just killing a witness. And he would have spoken briefly about what he […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
For this chapter, we were trying something I might describe as a “forked outline,” where almost every page contained suggestions of other possibilities. I have forgotten most of these suggestions by now, and this page is so laden with seeming […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
A group storytelling roundtable seems like a great way for this gang to pass the time, as long as no one asks Scipio to do it and Bert keeps it clean. NOBODY ON THEIR PHONES HERE, AMIRITE? Putting Bert across […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
