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Annotations Every Day - Written by T Campbell & Flo Kahn - Illustrated by John & Jason Waltrip

Figure she might already be.

Chapter 34 – Page 3

on September 11, 2014
Chapter: Chapter 34
└ Tags: JJ Berten, Shanna, Xan
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  1. Chaltab
    Chaltab
    September 11, 2014, 12:08 am | # | Reply

    Oooh, Sloppy work, JJ. Letting Shanna see you before you saw her.

    • Twitcher
      Twitcher
      September 11, 2014, 12:25 pm | # | Reply

      Even sloppier– JJ can’t possibly know this, but if he kills Xan–Penk– he kills part of the little narrative H.R.’s been building in Arkerra, and H.R. may well get increasingly nuttier as a result.

  2. insomniac
    insomniac
    September 11, 2014, 12:08 am | # | Reply

    Oh. Right. Her mother.

    Can’t believe I missed that.

    • SteelRaven
      SteelRaven
      September 11, 2014, 3:25 am | # | Reply

      Still a leap but yeah, she needs someone to blame.

      • Belisarius
        Belisarius
        November 4, 2015, 2:48 am | # | Reply

        Abit, but not much. She took false realities as a general blame, and gamers having been loud nd obnoxious in the new medium of her field (the internets new newspaper) got her pissed and she tied both negatives together. It makes good sense, it’s a good motive for her actions, albeit going extreme and (for a good reason in this specific situation) pretty paranoid. She’s got a good motive or her actions, great writing as usual

    • TBeckett
      TBeckett
      September 11, 2014, 12:00 pm | # | Reply

      Yeah, I’m really hoping we see that explored! It makes me realize Shanna is more important to the themes of this story than I could have guessed during her first few chapters!

    • Eric
      Eric
      September 11, 2014, 2:43 pm | # | Reply

      Oh yeah. I missed it too. Explains her motivations.

      Although I really loved the cameo by Faans Shana on the weekend. :)

    • Jack Vermicelli
      Jack Vermicelli
      September 11, 2014, 3:33 pm | # | Reply

      Huh?

      • The_Rippy_One
        The_Rippy_One
        September 11, 2014, 3:48 pm | # | Reply

        Shana’s mom consistently loses herself in make-believe worlds. From a certain perspective, games encourage people to do the same. To someone whose loved one got lost in the land of make believe, that could seem like a dangerous sort of affirmation, one that it might be best to tear apart before someone else’s life gets ruined. We are suppositioning that this page demonstrates this line of thinking as the basis of Shana’s anti-game crusade.

        • eschmenk
          eschmenk
          September 11, 2014, 7:41 pm | # | Reply

          I would take it more as an example of psychological transference. That’s an irrational emotional response. Basically, she takes the emotions cause by her mother’s situation out on anyone and anything that reminds her of that. It’s like what you said, except that rather than there being a “line of thinking,” it’s just automatic. So, perhaps her mother’s lapses into unreality caused her to feel abandoned, but she suppressed those emotions, and now to her it feels as if the gamers are are abandoning her. It’s the suppressed emotions popping back up inappropriately.

  3. Avris
    Avris
    September 11, 2014, 12:10 am | # | Reply

    Careful, Shanna! Point your nose away from him.

  4. Anonymouse
    Anonymouse
    September 11, 2014, 12:43 am | # | Reply

    Welp, that was a close call.

  5. Thomas
    Thomas
    September 11, 2014, 12:52 am | # | Reply

    Rectangular text is not something Shanna actually said, but something she prepares to say. It gets interrupted by conversation from JJ Berten standing at Xan’s door – JJ’s visible in the last panel.

    (I had to reread the strip a few times to get this, so I thought this might help others figuring things out.)

    • Chris
      Chris
      September 11, 2014, 1:20 am | # | Reply

      I thought it came off more as her thinking about the tail end of their conversation before she left which we didn’t get to see.

      • Swagner
        Swagner
        September 11, 2014, 1:25 am | # | Reply

        That’s the way I read it, too.

      • insomniac
        insomniac
        September 11, 2014, 7:15 am | # | Reply

        I don’t think so; she stalks off, and then turns around, and starts back over. She thought of what else she wanted to say, and was angry enough to actually go back and say it.

        • Thomas
          Thomas
          September 11, 2014, 8:57 am | # | Reply

          @ Chris & Swagner: That’s what I thought at first too, but then I reached the conclusion insomniac describes above.

        • TBeckett
          TBeckett
          September 11, 2014, 12:00 pm | # | Reply

          Same here

        • eschmenk
          eschmenk
          September 11, 2014, 1:23 pm | # | Reply

          Looking at it again, I almost completely agree, but I don’t think she necessarily knows what she will say when she returns. She walks away, then stops. Then she turns around while replaying part of the argument. I think she’s getting angrier and more determined to keep arguing as she replays the argument, but we don’t see a good comeback from her and I’m not getting the sense that she’s satisfied with something that she just thought of.

          I suspect that Xan mentioning Freud may have reminded Shanna of psychiatrists and her mother and psychiatric issues seemed to be a major topic in Fans, so that comment, in particular, may have been what set Shanna off.

          • Thomas
            Thomas
            September 11, 2014, 8:55 pm | # | Reply

            Rectangular text is all Shanna’s. “Freudian personal basis” is a comeback at Xan’s suggestion that Shanna needs to explore her own reasons for disliking computer games. Shanna tries to convince herself that her anti-gaming bias is purely objective, but deep down she may have realized there’s a connection to her mother’s illness.

      • Chris
        Chris
        September 11, 2014, 8:44 am | # | Reply

        Another Chris! This isn’t good… not good at all.

        …or is it?

        • Thomas
          Thomas
          September 11, 2014, 9:00 am | # | Reply

          Since your avatar is already making eyes at HR above, I’d say you two’ll get along fine. ;)

  6. FoolishOwl
    FoolishOwl
    September 11, 2014, 1:24 am | # | Reply

    “I have an issue with fucking unreality being marketed as a market alternative to reality!”

    That does nag at me.

    I’ve long thought that the ability to imagine fictional narratives — to imagine other points of view, other possible worlds — is essential to self-consciousness. In other worlds, it’s fundamental to being human.

    But, it worries me how extensively certain sorts of fictional narratives are marketed to us. How often it is that we receive the heroic fantasy, in which one isolated individual — or at best, a small group — is the agent of historic change. Yet that’s not how things ever work.

    Real problems are less like a band of adventurers slaying a dragon, more like the creation of an adventurers’ guild in order to agitate for rights and government support.

    Come to think of it, if one’s been immersed deeply enough in the community of players in an MMO, you’ll actually see democratic movements sprout up from time to time, though rarely so strongly “in character” as the adventurers’ guild.

    • nemui
      nemui
      September 11, 2014, 8:05 am | # | Reply

      Historically, heroic fantasy has a perfectly valid point – it’s not trying to realistically represent the RW experience (what would be the point in that?), it’s simply trying to feed us the imaginary narrative with us as the protagonist. That’s a socially useful because it makes people strive toward an imaginary goal, and even though that’s almost invariably futile, the side effects serve a purpose. If every soldier on a battlefield has a fantasy of being The Hero and winning the war, they’re more likely to charge suicidally into gunfire than they’d be with a clear awareness of their actual role (fight feebly and die horribly).

      We’re all parts of a mechanism, and heroic fantasy has been a necessary lubricant for centuries. However, it serves less of a purpose in the modern world, and yet it’s being force-fed to us harder than ever before. The inevitable disappointment when it turns out we don’t actually win at life and get the girl and ride off into the sunset… well, I imagine it’s a significant contributor to the global depression phenomenon.

      • Twitcher
        Twitcher
        September 11, 2014, 1:24 pm | # | Reply

        People who buy into fantasy as reality largely have a problem with “aberrant decoding”, something that’s one of the first signs of schizophrenia and other schizoid mental illnesses. Aberrant decoding has a genetic component, but is often enabled by childhood abuse or neglect: If you don’t get an accurate idea of how the world works from family, friends, or outside education/intervention, media is your only friend. A key case: That guy who shot up a sorority, as well as being mentally ill, had a dad who bought their kids’ affection: Notably, through a copy of “The Secret.”

      • FoolishOwl
        FoolishOwl
        September 11, 2014, 10:38 pm | # | Reply

        “Don’t be a hero” is pretty much a cliche for an NCO to say to troops — because soldiers who try to be “the hero” and take extraordinary risks get themselves killed, while endangering their fellow soldiers. Soldiers depend upon teamwork and mutual support, and heroics are completely incompatible with that.

        • nemui
          nemui
          September 12, 2014, 5:30 am | # | Reply

          “Don’t be a hero” but also “you got this, and if it turns out you don’t, we totally never leave our own behind except when we do”. They don’t want all-out heroics, true, but they do want the baseless unthinking optimism.
          Heroic fantasy is about more than warfare, though. The feeling of the whole world being centered around us and our glorious, inevitable success is what makes people move forward with their lives, (hopefully) being productive members of society. It also makes some people act like unbearable, monstrously entitled assholes too…

    • Kassie
      Kassie
      September 11, 2014, 11:42 am | # | Reply

      Hitler’s little band changed a good deal of stuff.
      It doesn’t take that much work to call the FBI in, if you’ve already got the evidence.
      You really can take advantage of institutions, if you’re willing to understand how they operate.

    • TBeckett
      TBeckett
      September 11, 2014, 12:13 pm | # | Reply

      The heroic fantasy has a number of uses, not the least of which is that we all are the center of our own heroic struggle. The stakes may not always be life-changing, but we are forced to make similar choices, if only in an abstract way (self-gain vs. self-sacrifice, responding to an opportunity/”call to adventure”).

      But perhaps more relevant is this idea of the Hero’s Journey, an archetype in literature and storytelling that has been discussed a lot by critics in the past few decades. George Lucas used it when writing the original Star Wars, following the traditional arc of impetus, initial refusal, mentorship, acceptance of the call, loss, descent into danger, and eventual achievement. But the Journey isn’t just about tropes, it’s about the “spiritual” side of growth. All of the growth that a Hero undergoes in a relatively limited time mirrors what we undergo in real life. So maybe the heroic narrative doesn’t give us detailed advice on positive change on our communities, but it gets at the challenges we all face.

    • Borg
      Borg
      April 27, 2017, 3:22 pm | # | Reply

      Not every story is intended to exactly model behavior, and even children can generally tell the difference without trouble. When the hero slays the dragon, people get that you should take away “believe in yourself,” not “go fight fire-breathing monsters alone.”

      Besides, reality does often produce stories with a small number of heroes. The Civil Rights Movement, for example, involved tons of people, but only a few people like Martin Luther King Junior or Malcolm X. They’re the heroes, and everybody else was the supporting cast. Sure, we could go into a lot more detail, but it’s a reasonable simplification and it’s how people naturally see things.

  7. GentlemanBreakfast
    GentlemanBreakfast
    September 11, 2014, 2:10 am | # | Reply

    Rooky mistake JJ! You almost had her.

  8. Cr'Nj
    Cr'Nj
    September 11, 2014, 3:23 am | # | Reply

    She’s close enough that I’m not sure Berten couldn’t have seen her. He might be doing that on purpose to try and see if endangering Xan makes her come back, taking the chance to avoid violence again. Then again, totally inconspicuous coat.

  9. Kennerly
    Kennerly
    September 11, 2014, 3:45 am | # | Reply

    The difference that Shanna doesn’t see is choice. People choose to enjoy games. People like her mother didn’t choose unreality over reality, she’s unable to distinguish one from the other.

    • Thomas
      Thomas
      September 11, 2014, 9:07 am | # | Reply

      The lack of choice in her mother’s case is what makes it infuriating to Shanna. Gamers can simply log out, but her mother is unable to switch voluntarily. That said, Shanna might dislike theater & other forms of entertainment as well.

  10. Cubanpep
    Cubanpep
    September 11, 2014, 3:57 am | # | Reply

    Nice twist.

  11. Nathanyel
    Nathanyel
    September 11, 2014, 4:16 am | # | Reply

    Always interesting how the Bad Guy arriving at the house never bothers to look down the street both ways. I mean, it looks like Shanna was just leaving, having left the house maybe a minute earlier, then stopped and returned.

    • James Rye
      James Rye
      September 11, 2014, 5:35 am | # | Reply

      Maybe he does so next page? Would be an interesting development for sure.

    • Dean
      Dean
      September 11, 2014, 9:48 pm | # | Reply

      The moustache blocks his peripheral vision.

  12. Cubanpep
    Cubanpep
    September 11, 2014, 4:53 am | # | Reply

    So… is she going to be an idiot and draw attention to herself by running away?

  13. Chantelune
    Chantelune
    September 11, 2014, 5:36 am | # | Reply

    Come on, why would he need a warrant ? Isn’t his mustache official looking enough ?!

  14. Frigg_Fanboi
    Frigg_Fanboi
    September 11, 2014, 7:07 am | # | Reply

    Getting close JJ, you’re hot on the trail of Carmen Sandiego.

  15. Theodemus
    Theodemus
    September 11, 2014, 7:09 am | # | Reply

    In the tags, it mistakenly says just “JJ” this time, not “JJ Berten” as usual.

  16. Rhee
    Rhee
    September 11, 2014, 8:37 am | # | Reply

    That’s just cause we’re seeing him so often now we’re on a first-name (only) basis.

    Annnnnd this is my first ever comment and this comic is super duper. :)

    • Rhee
      Rhee
      September 11, 2014, 8:40 am | # | Reply

      Annnnnnd that was supposed to be a response to Theodemus but my copy of How To Make Replies To Comments For Dummies (TM) is under the leg of the table so it doesn’t wobble.

      • Thomas
        Thomas
        September 11, 2014, 9:10 am | # | Reply

        That’s probably because you’ve outgrown the need for it, since this comment is pretty funny. :)

  17. Connie
    Connie
    September 11, 2014, 9:27 am | # | Reply

    Bandit?

    • Connie
      Connie
      September 11, 2014, 9:29 am | # | Reply

      Ok, well, not Bandit obviously because we know what she (supposedly) looks like. But sure has the same parlance going.

  18. Psolo Ghoti
    Psolo Ghoti
    September 11, 2014, 10:16 am | # | Reply

    Damn, he’s even quicker than I thought!

    • Karishi
      Karishi
      September 11, 2014, 10:53 am | # | Reply

      His car runs on Mustache.

      • Cr'Nj
        Cr'Nj
        September 11, 2014, 11:01 am | # | Reply

        I’d say Ford Moustache 2015 GoaT, but that’s looking more similar to a Camaro convertible. Moustachevrolet just doesn’t roll off the tongue as much, though. Still, the trim looks suitably different.

  19. CorrTerek
    CorrTerek
    September 11, 2014, 11:34 am | # | Reply

    Damn. I was hoping Xan’s comment about whether Shanna wanted to travel more meant that they were going to leave the house immediately.

    • Beroli
      Beroli
      September 11, 2014, 12:11 pm | # | Reply

      Who’s they? Xan’s not (or wasn’t; he might be now) going anywhere; Shanna did leave the house immediately.

      • CorrTerek
        CorrTerek
        September 11, 2014, 12:39 pm | # | Reply

        Ah, you know what, I misread a few pages back where Xan was talking about making first contact. For some reason I assumed that he would go with Shanna. I realize now he was simply talking about e-mailing the people in question.

        On another note, she didn’t warn Xan like she did Joel, did she?

        • eschmenk
          eschmenk
          September 11, 2014, 12:56 pm | # | Reply

          I suspect that she would have been too annoyed to do it and Xan didn’t seem to be welcoming any advice from her, so I doubt it. Actually, thinking to do that might have been a reason for her to turn around, but her thoughts and facial expression don’t support it.

          • CorrTerek
            CorrTerek
            September 11, 2014, 1:36 pm | # | Reply

            Might not have been necessary anyway, since Xan seems to be clever enough to put the pieces together on his own.

    • TBeckett
      TBeckett
      September 11, 2014, 12:17 pm | # | Reply

      Although with Xan’s technical know-how he might already have a laptop in hand and climbing out a window, communicating through the intercom with a walky-talky.

  20. Mordecai
    Mordecai
    September 11, 2014, 12:54 pm | # | Reply

    J.J.’s accent appears to have gotten a lot more Southern since last we heard him speak.

    • eschmenk
      eschmenk
      September 11, 2014, 1:01 pm | # | Reply

      Intentionally, I assume. I wouldn’t call that Southern, though. It seems rather rural / rustic, but I’m not good at accents.

  21. kitastrophe
    kitastrophe
    September 11, 2014, 1:20 pm | # | Reply

    JJ better dump a few more points into perception next time he levels up.

  22. Devlerbat
    Devlerbat
    September 11, 2014, 2:18 pm | # | Reply

    I was going to ask if Shana had issues with other forms of escapism such as movies, television, and books then I realized that she just might….

    • Devlerbat
      Devlerbat
      September 11, 2014, 2:23 pm | # | Reply

      Though I do feel that I need to add that Shana is not very introspective if she really believes she has no personal bias against escapist entertainment.

      • eschmenk
        eschmenk
        September 11, 2014, 7:24 pm | # | Reply

        How can anyone who is biased know that they are biased? If you know that a belief is wrong, you don’t believe it anymore. It’s not quite that black and white — a person may go through a period where they question their beliefs or where they become aware of thought patterns that have led them astray in the past, but so far Shanna doesn’t seem to be doing that.

        People can still be introspective and yet have blind spots. Psychological transference is irrational. If someone could that they were doing it, they wouldn’t be doing it.

        • eschmenk
          eschmenk
          September 11, 2014, 7:43 pm | # | Reply

          *sigh* Last sentence: If someone could know that they…

          • CorrTerek
            CorrTerek
            September 11, 2014, 9:01 pm | # | Reply

            People can definitely know they’re biased. In Shanna’s case, though, the bias may not be particularly obvious to her unless her mother was an avid gamer.

  23. Eric
    Eric
    September 11, 2014, 2:56 pm | # | Reply

    There was a study done that found that rats in a cage did drugs as much as possible. But they also found that rats in a rat paradise with food, room to run, other rats to hang with, greenery, and all sorts of other good stuff ignored the drugs.

    For the most part, life is a cage. It sucks. This has been recognized forever. 2500 years ago Plato wrote in the Republic that the idea of an afterlife was necessary as reward for service in this world, to motivate people to be good and faithful. But at the same time he recognized that if people understood that the afterlife was a paradise, they would seek death or even kill themselves to get to that paradise and out of the hardships of this life. So those who commit suicide are denied the afterlife.

    This is held true in most major religions; Islam, Christianity, Judaism all present an afterlife as a reward for service and faith in this world, but also indicate that suicide is prohibited and will deny the afterlife to that person.

    For many, life sucks donkey sphincter. Many people want to spend as little time as possible in the real world as they can. Escapist entertainment such as video games are – theoretically – less destructive than drugs, but the principle is the same.

    Because the same question holds for us as it did for the rats. Is life a paradise, or a cage?

    * and yes, that includes suicide bombing so even if Allah is out there, he isn’t going to be thrilled with suicide bombers – no virgins for them

  24. Observer
    Observer
    March 16, 2015, 2:22 pm | # | Reply

    Its getting harder to hold on to the hope that she told him about the danger off camera and is not a scatterbrain… but at least he has enough information to piece it together if he is as intelligent and paranoid as he initially came off as.

    Still Shanna, are you going to just go merrily bouncing around endangering the lives of everyone who might be helping the Five in the game as well? Try to get your cloak and dagger on a bit harder.

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