FB: These national security councils are rotating faster and faster. Let’s let Flo do the talking here: OK so we’re going to try and get a good two or three pages worth of data into one here on the basis that […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: Some faces, no words or even emoji can do justice. This page adds little to the plot…Hammerhead has spelled out his reasons for leaving, and there’s not much Penk can counter with, so we already knew on the last […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: Sharxit. I appreciate that Penk’s political skill has not deserted him through this exchange. He’s tried to challenge land shark pride (“Why do you flee like minnows?”) and used Hammerhead’s own words against him (“Have I not been proven strongest […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This one was Flo with some tweaks from me. She was really happy with the last line I added, IIRC. I also like the “practiced ease” bit: it shows Penk thinking like a tactician. And that tactical thinking is also […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
You see what I meant on the last page, maybe. Bandit’s gone from having her entire existence dismissed by Kepfer to blithely giving him orders, and that progression was mostly off-panel. This scene represented one last disagreement between me and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
