In my early writing days, I greatly overused the technique of writing something down, finding the flaw in it, and then turning that flaw into an in-dialogue joke rather than reworking it to eliminate the flaw entirely. You can only […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Love that first frame of John’s! Talk about a visual transition that ramps up the stakes! Credit goes to Phil for the specific design of this trap and the way it’s put together: I was a lot less particular in […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I touched on this in an earlier annotation or two, but one of my big preoccupations in comics scriptwriting is fight dialogue. It used to be (and frankly, sometimes still is) a struggle for me to get the right words […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
May as well put this here as anywhere, I guess: it’s where the page went in sequence originally. In order: Harky passes on his Firestone (Chapter 28), adventurers protest the Head-of-House class (chapter 24), we flash back to the Battle […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
We asked for a variety of reactions in panel 2, and I like how Erica made some of the humans protective of each other. “I won’t let you hurt my family, stranger!” They may be united in seemingly impenetrable racism […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
