Annotated 29-23
Wait, we’re done a page early? Really? Does that mean Phil was taking some of my sentiments about keeping things within 24 pages to heart? Ha ha no, that’s definitely not it, see previous and next chapter.
Fr’Nj and Scipio’s exchange here, and the Scipio-Syr’Nj scene that set it up, led some to conclude we were foreshadowing her death, a misconception I was happy to perpetuate.
I think I went on the record once as saying that we had kept to our designated update schedule without a break throughout Guilded Age‘s run. That’s not quite true: I forgot about the time Phil’s ceiling literally caved in and we had to take a pause as a result. That’s probably the reason as much as any that we ended up ending Chapter 29 here, but it’s also a pretty solid cliffhanger.
“Well, hey, there’s only four, that means we’ve got them outnumbered, right?”
“OHHHH NO, I AIN’T FALLIN’ FOR THAT AGAIN“
Why isn’t Goblaurence in the shot with the other heroes?
Because he and Rana are elsewhere, not banging on the gate like these four. Those are just the ones Bandit spotted.
Oh, I didn’t remember Rana was a character. Guy kinda blends with the background a lot. Thought it was just a cool shot to show the other A-Team, maybe if I had noticed the absence of Rana too I would’ve thought about it a little more. lol
Understandable! I may have made the same mistake the first time I read it.
“That’s probably the reason as much as any that we ended up ending Chapter 23 here…”
This is Chapter 29. Perhaps, “…ending Chapter 29 here on Page 23…” ?