Ideas for “fun in the sun, surf, and sand” were starting to feel thin on the ground, so Flo conceived this switch in focus. At this point in the story, JJ’s been introduced and is closing in on Xan and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: After the rousing musical number, a silent interlude… There’s just a few more chess pieces to move into place before we start up our series of final conflicts. Carol’s continuing decline probably speaks for itself at this point, and […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: Needs more goose-stepping hyenas. We’re doing a bit of a callback with Carol’s use of the word “riDICulous.” Each time she pitches the word like that, she’s lying…and this time, there’s clearly no one left to lie to but herself. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
FB: Lots of people debate the morality of the gun market, but nobody talks about all the upselling. Flo wrote this obvious parallel to Shanna buying her own gun, setting up Carol and Shanna’s final confrontation and reminding us that […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
I don’t think I figured out that the Sepia heroes had worked out to be “another five” until I got to the part of the script where Carol reasonably asks, “How MANY other people?” and I was like, “Oh, hey.” […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
