In an earlier version, the toll that saving the group took on Fr’Nj was going to be more personal; it was going to age her a bit… not to make her as old-looking as Faereksch’Nj, but maybe closer in age […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
Phil revised this from a totally different (short) narrative and left the note, “I don’t usually favor direct repetition of any of our incantations… but ‘Graiya’s Prayer,’ as it were, is the only one that I think would benefit from […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
When I sat down to write this scene, I meant to find some chemistry between Fr’Nj and Byron, but I somehow ended up with her doing a soliloquy while Byron’s barely able to perform first aid. In fact, one of […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
This page is an attempt to concentrate Phil’s original concept for the battle down to a single page, while also serving as a transition from the previous page to the trap we saw sprung at the start of the story. […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
“And after the runoff, we have… another tie vote, because Frigg changed her vote at the last second just to spite Rachel. TURNS OUT DEMOCRACY IS USELESS, OH WELL, BYRON’S YOUR LEADER, HAVE A NICE MISSION” Look at that body […] ↓ Read the rest of this entry…
